Thursday, July 30, 2009

When I Look Back Now.....

Why did you have to go then..??/
when I am here,
when you promised you wont ever leave me
When the feeling still burn inside me, the same way
the day when you came sauntering into my life.

I can still feel, the way you made me feel
The way you always had a way to make me smile
The way you looked at me, and made my heart go racing
The warmth of your smile, the content of your embrace

I can still feel your breath on my forehead
I can still listen to the gentle racing of your heart in my ear
I still have the feel of your touch on my lips
The belief that you are always going to be there

I loved it, when you looked into my eyes
The sparkle in your eyes, that told shouted out your love
Your silent ways of showing love....

....And then.. You were gone....

I can still feel the heart ache, to see you go
To leave me back here clawing on thin air
trying hard to grasp hold of your memories with me
The memories we had together.

- Nidhi Sharma (Me)


Cecilia said...

oh can feel the pain the poetry..u wrote it im guessing..can kinda relate to ..yeah..well dont know wht to say..keep posting :)

kochuthresiamma p .j said...

love the last three lines.
have you read
'When we two parted
in silence and tears'
by Byron?

иidhi S said...

@ Cecilia

WC.thanks for liking my stuff..will sure do :))

иidhi S said...

@ Kochuthresiamma

heya thanks.
Yeah, I love Shelley and Byron. ty.

иidhi S said...
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Saurav Sengupta said...

Well love nd pain always seem to be inter related in their own ways.
Very well crafted, really a lovely poem.

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